The Last Hour of America
1. Prologue: Tick-Tock Madness
- Setting the Stage: The story opens with a chaotic news montage. Protesters march with signs like "Death to Daylight Savings!" and "Time Tyranny Ends Here!" Politicians on talk shows argue about the "Time Consistency Act," a proposed constitutional amendment to standardize sunrises at 6:00 AM and sunsets at 6:00 PM everywhere in the country.
- Mood & Tone: There's a growing sense of societal unease. The narrator (a journalist or historian) explains that what started as an internet joke turned into a national crisis. People are sick of "losing an hour" or "gaining an hour" each year, and the confusion of time zones across the U.S. is seen as a relic of a "backward era."
- Foreshadowing: The narrator hints that "what seemed like a simple solution would, in the end, be America's final countdown."
2. Act 1: The Amendment of Annihilation
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Introduction of Key Characters:
- Senator Ezekiel "Zeek" Barnes (pro-Amendment, "The Great Synchronizer") – Charismatic, populist leader who champions the idea as "a return to natural order."
- Senator Marla Cho (anti-Amendment, "Time's Defender") – Pragmatic realist who argues that the variability of hours will "break society in half, both literally and figuratively."
- Calvin Rudd – Influential social media influencer-turned-political agitator known for his viral slogan "6-to-6 or Die Trying."
- Everyman Protagonist – A disillusioned middle-class worker (e.g., a truck driver, teacher, or nurse) who gets swept up in the madness, experiencing the growing extremism firsthand.
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The Proposal: The "Time Consistency Act" is formally introduced in Congress. It mandates that, nationwide, the sun will always rise at 6:00 AM and set at 6:00 PM. But here's the twist: the "hour" will no longer be 60 minutes. Instead, hours will stretch or shrink each day to ensure a 12-hour day and a 12-hour night. "Day hours" and "night hours" will also be different lengths.
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Public Reaction: The nation is divided into two warring factions:
- "Timekeepers" – Traditionalists who see this as lunacy. "An hour is an hour, you fools!" is their rallying cry.
- "Synchronists" – Reformists who argue that nature’s rhythm should dictate time, not clocks. “6-to-6 or Die!” becomes their war chant.
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Media Hysteria: Political pundits, celebrities, and late-night comedians all take sides. Conspiracy theories spread, claiming "The Globalists want to control time itself!"
3. Act 2: Civil Strife & Temporal Terror
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Societal Fractures:
- Businesses and public services are paralysed. Airlines can't schedule flights properly. Factories miss quotas. Streaming services have to issue constant app updates to match the "variable hours."
- Schools are forced to rework start times daily. Parents riot at school board meetings, blaming each other.
- Religious groups get involved. Some see the 6-to-6 system as "God's will," while others claim it’s a satanic mockery of divine order.
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Personal Conflict:
- The Everyman Protagonist is torn between his wife (a Timekeeper) and his brother (a radical Synchronist). Family dinners descend into shouting matches.
- His workplace (e.g., a trucking company) is forced to issue daily "new time schedules," and every day, it's slightly different. His boss yells, "You're an hour late!" and he yells back, "No, this hour is only 47 minutes long, dipshit!"
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Escalation of Violence:
- Synchronist groups begin storming clock towers and burning them to the ground. “Down with the old clocks!” becomes a popular graffiti slogan.
- Timekeeper militias start forming neighbourhood watch groups. They refuse to adjust clocks and broadcast "REAL TIME" signals from pirate radio stations.
- Small skirmishes break out. "Time Riots" are reported in Portland, Austin, and Des Moines. Protesters clash in the streets with clocks as makeshift weapons.
4. Act 3: The War of the Hours
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The Vote: A highly contentious national referendum is called to let citizens decide if the Time Consistency Act should become part of the Constitution. It's a 50/50 split in polls leading up to the vote. Chaos ensues on voting day:
- Timekeeper-controlled states refuse to adjust their clocks on voting day, causing polling locations to "close early."
- Synchronist-controlled states declare the day 13 hours long so polls stay open longer.
- By midnight (which isn’t even “mid” anymore), both sides claim victory. Accusations of “hour fraud” spread like wildfire.
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Political Collapse:
- With no clear winner, President Denholm (a weak, indecisive centrist) calls for a "time audit." This enrages both factions.
- Multiple states declare they will “secede from Federal Time Control” and operate on their own custom time systems. Texas introduces the "Texas Standard Time" where every hour is 60 minutes, and Florida adopts "Forever Summer Time" where the sun always "rises" at 5:00 AM, regardless of reality.
- State of Emergency: Martial law is declared, but because the military itself is split between Synchronist and Timekeeper sympathizers, enforcement becomes impossible.
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The Everyman’s Descent:
- Our protagonist tries to stay neutral, but when his brother (a radical Synchronist) is arrested, his family erupts into fury. He’s torn between loyalty to his wife, brother, and his own personal sanity.
- The protagonist begins hallucinating from exhaustion, unable to mentally process the daily change in "hour length." Time itself becomes meaningless. Days feel longer and shorter with no consistency.
5. Act 4: The Sundering of the States
- The Fall of Washington, D.C.: Protesters storm the Capitol demanding “temporal justice.” Rioters set fire to clocks. The iconic Doomsday Clock is smashed live on TV.
- The Great Secession: States begin formally seceding. The Republic of Texas and the Florida Forever Time Compact announce themselves as independent nations. California follows suit.
- The End of America: The United States disintegrates into dozens of "Time Nations" where each state, city, or community now has its own "hour length." In some places, you can live a 15-hour day, while in others, the “hour” is just 43 minutes long.
- The Last Broadcast: The Everyman listens to the last national broadcast from a pirate radio station. The anchor's final words are chilling: “We once ruled time, but now time rules us. Godspeed, citizens. If you can even call it 'speed' anymore.”
6. Epilogue: Clockwork Ashes
- Time Unravelled:
- Years later, the former United States has become a collection of "time-tribes." Cross-border trade is impossible. An hour of work in Alabama might be 45 minutes in Mississippi, so contracts can’t be enforced.
- Temporal Schisms: Each “nation” has its own unique time system. New York operates on a "metric hour" (100 minutes per hour), while parts of Utah revert to ancient Babylonian time (base-60 hours).
- The Everyman, now an old man, reflects on the "old days" when everyone could agree on what an hour was. He mutters, "They fought for control of time... but time doesn't give a damn."
Themes & Commentary
- The Futility of Control: The story explores humanity’s obsession with controlling natural forces, like time itself, and the inevitable collapse of such control.
- Division & Polarization: The way petty issues spiral into civil war reflects modern political extremism.
- Madness of Consistency: The desire for "perfect order" creates the exact chaos it was meant to prevent.
That’s it. A story about clocks, zealots, and the unrelenting tyranny of "fixing what ain’t broken." Let me know if you want a specific chapter fleshed out or more angry details.